Class Feedback from the First Draft

Our whole class watched the first draft of our music video. They had a few points on how we could improve it when it comes to our finishing it off. Some of these were:

• Timing at the beginning when the actor moves his head up to match the song
• Make some shots lighter as they are un clear
• First shot may be too long
• More cuts and edits
• More sense of story
• Use flashbacks to tell storyline
• Longer shots of london, some cuts are too quick